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 Unleashed emotions-- My Poetic chaos!
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Posted on 01-04-08 8:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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It seems the Sajha is gaining the literature touch back again! So I am here once again saying why not share somethings I write again!
And this is my dedication to the virtual world.... Virtually real world I would say!

The blue nowhere…

I am just a void;
a space not sensed!!
I am just a stranger;
faceless picture framed!!

I am just a blink;
letters in your screen!!
I am just a code;
an emoticon within!!

I am just a ghost;
invisible and around!!
I am just a lost soul;
never searched,never found!!

I am just a rant;
written, read and gone!!
I am just a traveling dust,
with the wind: blown!!



 
Posted on 01-04-08 9:01 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nirmaaannnn bro!

You are back?! How have you been?

Today I am seeing old friends in sajha, one in Chautari and you in here. Happy New Year!

As always, a captivating poem, your trademark!


 
Posted on 01-05-08 1:06 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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. Welcome back to your own galore, the long-lost gladiator of Sajha colosseum!

Another Nirman trademark as said by Mappey and making the virtual world as a dwelling could be infectious, no?

Hope all is well and in anticipation to hear more from you!


 
Posted on 01-05-08 2:15 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nice poemImage Hosted by ImageShack.us

"The blue nowhere"..even your destiny in the virtual life is seem as illusions, dont worry cause in the mortal world no man will be no island, as in the Hindu myth reveres emphasist " As  Nataraja dances the rhythm of the cosmos, Kali on the other realms dances the cycle of life.....being Durga, being responsibility, being belong to the emanations, being "Shakti",being divine represent the pair power to govern of the existence.....your fearsome being nowhere will splendourly remove.....

On this fifth day of English New Year your destiny to nowhere in the blue emoticon wholehearted ,confidantly  well wish impaired.

 

You are not alone........

Friendships, hope and peace for unity is the wonderful gift bestowed from Sajha`s.....

Cheers,  

 


 
Posted on 01-05-08 10:12 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nirman bro!!:oD

if ur a void, a space,
i feel thee!:oD (ask those esp interested in architecture, if u dun believe me!;oP)
faceless u aint to me!
u stranger wannabe!;oP

a blink?
u do exist for me, even if its just for a moment
u, the lovely letters in my screen!;oP
a code, an emoticon?
which brings humor and msgs to me,
come out, come out, show more, open urself to me!;oP

a ghost u say?
oh no! staying invisible and yet all-seeing me?
ghost arent no diff from us humans, unfair they seem to be? :o( ;oP
a lost soul u say?
or u missing ur (sexy?;oP) body?
stop playing hide-and-seek, a body seeks its soul,
we(the bodies) do, u've got no choice but to agree!
(cos i speak the truth! seriously pls dun "fight" me on this!;oP)

just a rant u say?
when effort is placed to write, effort is made to read? effort spent to think?
if ur gone, wat happens to the effort(s) that was taken?  forgotten? :oS hehe
a traveling dust u might be,
guess wat? u make me sneeze
im sensitive to u, u see
but its all good, cos then i do realize ur here around me! :oD

and do remember, the wind will never stop blowin again, on me
i will start sneezing, telln me ur back! my lovely bluey!( ;oP jpt wahahaha)

anyways needed to type and thot might end up typing too much if i let myself(lack of time and lack of sleep u see :oS hehe) and since i had wanted to say hi to u(nirman bro!:oD) plus loved that poem of urs(wat do i not love of urs?;oP hehe) so yeah...just came up with a "reply" haha..well not really a poem ..but one gets the gist?;oP that i was enjoying myself and of cos enjoying everything wat u shared?:oD...

until we see more of urs...have a good one and hope all is well!:oD
good day!:oD

 
Posted on 01-05-08 10:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 01-05-08 9:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NIRMAN!! Welcome back. A wonderful poem indeed. Please write more, a gift should not be wasted. Totally felt your poem. :)
 
Posted on 01-05-08 9:47 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wohoo..Nirman bro..how have you been? Hibernating ..huh. And, back with a bang..nice

Keep them coming..


 
Posted on 01-06-08 4:06 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Mapey bro,
Have just been caught up in lots of things! Been around! :)

Flippy,
If I would be gladiator, what u would be then??
Will see if I can write more!!

Natya,
Blue nowhere is where I feel me! Thanks for your kind words!

Danny broda,
U r the only one I can't beat on writing the hearts out!!
Hope all is well for u!


Maverick,
thanks!

Rythm,
Remember old times?? Why don't we go on same road again?? Why don't ya start IT again!!

NKC,
So u outta hibernation again!
Good to see ya back and banging!!

Here is one for a day!

The return of hangover!!

Valleys of deaths;
Do you have soul??
You played your game;
and called mine foul!!

Can I dance??
dance on the bleeding floors!!
Plethora of bleeding souls;
is one of these yours??

I wish to kiss you;
kiss you for years!!
and let my soul die;
in those bleeding tears!!

Let me be me;
I am not changing thee!!
I have lost my soul;
Can thou find thee’s??



 
Posted on 01-06-08 8:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nirman, I remember old times but I dont understand what you are asking me to start!:s
 
Posted on 01-06-08 11:43 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nirman...where's it coming from :P ???? do i know the source :-S...yeuta thread maa yeso hereko...nirman ko naam dekhey...padhu na sabai ko reply bhaneko...bujhey dekhi mari jaam la...some one get me a dictionary...nirman i don't see u these days...wats up wid u ??? lost in the....




laterzzzz

 
Posted on 01-07-08 2:56 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am glad that the client came late for meeting. Clicked on it out of sheer wait-boredom. My my my ... you poemize words quite beautifully. Loved both poems--the first one, even more, perhaps.
 
Posted on 01-07-08 3:08 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wow Nirman, very nice..liked
I am just a rant;
written, read and gone!!
I am just a traveling dust,
with the wind: blown

btw, r u who I think u r?

 
Posted on 01-14-08 3:52 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Rythm nani,
U know what I am talking abt
Dont act ignorant as if u dunno nething!!

Harkedai,
Aafno aafno katha ho babai!! Tmro ni din aaunchha!!

Sum_off,
Its honor for me to have you on this thread as I adore all of your stories. Its nice that you share em with us! Keep writing!!

SNDY Bhauju,
Thanks!! So I am who I am now!!

One for a day!!

The Beginning!

Clocks ticked by leaving the time behind!
I wished for the time to stop…
but it flew by, just leaving the memories…
and I stood  all alone, alone behind doors!

I wished to hold my breathe
to catch up with yours and feel within my soul.
I wish to hear your whispers again …
for your voice to play in my memory lanes!

I wish for being lame in your arms,
just for I can be with you again.
I wish for chapped lips again..
for each kiss, each breathe ignites my soul!!

And I lay here all alone on my bed…
wishing a moment more,  a mere second more;
for that I could give life and more…
And then you whispered- ‘This is not the end’…


Oh yeah last but not least, wanted to share something! I recently started a website following my passion for photography and poems. Visit it if you like!! Any comments will be highly appreciated!
www.poemographic.com

Thanks all !!              
 


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