नेउचे  क्या दामि लेख्नु भएको। सारै राम्रो लग्यो।

You are all I’ve dreamed of,
you are all my deed.
You are all I’ve wanted,
you are all I need.

Amazing bro,

Thank you very much. I feel accomplished that everyone who read, liked it. Nepali or english ta, jun language ma mood chalchha, tesai ma lekhidine ho re kya.  LOL...french re feri..no way. I don't even want to recall those 3 months when I was trying to learn a b c of french couple of years ago.

सुन्तले ज्यु, 

लौ न नी, म अङ्रेजी को गुरु चाइ परीन है। जिन्दगीमा कहिले बोर्डिङ स्कुलको दैलामा पाइला त हाल्न पाइएन। हजुरको नेपाली को अगाडी त मेरो नेपाली को के कुरा गराइ भयो र?  तर ति गुलिया शब्दहरु को लागी भने म हजुर को आभारी भए।

अनी ए रातै सुन्तली को बिहे भकभके सँग पो भएछ।  हाम्रो सुन्तलेजी को बर्बाद नै पो हुने भो त। अब त्यो भकभके शाहरुक खान नै हो भने त ठेगाना त पक्कै मुम्बई तिरको होला क्या रे।

nepal ko chhora,

ramro lagyo malai ta mama(i think u remember that in brt thread we became mama-bhanji). keep going.

Ohoo Manshree Bhanji,

I am glad that you liked the poem. Yes, I do remember you from that thread. You seem busy these days...haven't seen u here for while. Hope things are well at your side.

Hey dude, would you mind if I send this poem to my gf (she doesn't visit sajha) ?

Hey man,

This "YOU" can apply to anybody. So, if you think it suits well with your "YOU", then feel free dude.

nkc bro, daaammiii chha yaar----- who is "You" bro? --"Na tum jaano na hum"---chai nabham hai

tyo suntale ke bus ta yeha po aayipugechha  ma ta muglin ma kurdai ka hairaan-----bemani  birkhe pani yehi aayipugecha--

Awesome !! :-)

Kalejo bro,

Bro lai daami lageko sunda malai pani khusi lagyo. Lau na..who is "You" re feri.   Jun "You" ko lagi bhanera yo poem lekheko the, tyo "You" lai ta aba bhauju namaste bhannu parne bhai sakyo.

 

Cerine,

Thank you very much for the comment.

WOW!!!!
Awesommmmmeeeee........ da! major change garera literature rakhne ki?  ;)

Great piece. Would love to read more of your poems.

"Jun "You" ko lagi bhanera yo poem lekheko the, tyo "You" lai ta aba bhauju namaste bhannu parne bhai sakyo." Sorry to hear that ( if you are serious).

 

" म त एक्लो, साथी भन्नु त मेरै सास थियो।
तर हृदय मा भने केवल तिम्रो नै बास थियो।"

You are all I’ve dreamed of,
you are all my deed.
You are all I’ve wanted,
you are all I need.

Ma kun sabda le tarif garu khoi!!  Kabita ra poetry duitai Attttiiiii ramra chhan. Tarif garna suhaune sabda nai bhetina, Jun sabda samjhiyo fikka lagchha.  

Ma yaha bata "Standing Aviation" di ra chhu hai...